A flash of fiction…

for Friday Fictioneers

 

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We stood as a solemn verger, rod in hand, led the robed choir to the candlelit stalls. 

We sat.

With a sweep of their leader’s hand, the choir burst into song.  At first, soft as a whisper, then, loud as thunder.  The concinnity of voices and harmony took my breath away.

I shivered.

Thirty voices swooping and swirling, this way, that way; up, down then up again.  All thoughts drifted from my mind as music filled every corner of my being.

Too soon the choir fell silent, turned and disappeared from sight. 

For a few moments, I sat in hope of catching an echo.

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As a member of Friends of Cathedral Music, I regularly visit Winchester Cathedral to listen to their magnificent choir.

 

unamed-from-ted-strutzFriday Fictioneers is hosted by Rochelle and this week’s photo is from Ted Strutz.

 

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63 thoughts on “A flash of fiction…”

  1. neilmacdon's avatar neilmacdon February 5, 2020 / 15:49

    concinnity – what a lovely word!

    • ceayr's avatar ceayr February 5, 2020 / 18:22

      Hey, that was what I was going to say!

      • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings February 6, 2020 / 10:54

        Isn’t it just? Thanks you two!

  2. Sadje's avatar Sadje February 5, 2020 / 16:10

    A lovely post.

      • Sadje's avatar Sadje February 6, 2020 / 10:56

        You’re welcome Keith.

  3. pennygadd51's avatar pennygadd51 February 5, 2020 / 16:52

    I loved this story. When I was younger, I sang in all sorts of choirs, and directed some. Music is wonderful.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings February 6, 2020 / 10:56

      Me too and my daughter is currently begging me to join her community choir!

  4. ceayr's avatar ceayr February 5, 2020 / 18:24

    Very unyou, Keith.
    Sweet and surprisingly touching.
    And concinnity is a gem.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings February 6, 2020 / 10:58

      I have my moments. Not often, just now and again! Cheers CE

  5. Na'ama Yehuda's avatar Na'ama Yehuda February 5, 2020 / 19:19

    Sweet! Made me smile and the photo you added it delightful! That middle froggy, however, needs a tuning fork … 😉

  6. Iain Kelly's avatar Iain Kelly February 5, 2020 / 20:09

    Lovely Keith, you captured the power and emotion a choir can elicit, especially in an impressive setting.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings February 6, 2020 / 11:03

      It can, which is why I attend as many cathedral choral events each year as I can. Thanks, Iain.

  7. msjadeli's avatar msjadeli February 5, 2020 / 20:11

    “He who sings prays twice.” Sounds heavenly, Keith. Thanks for highlighting the group.

      • msjadeli's avatar msjadeli February 6, 2020 / 16:35

        You’re welcome.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings February 6, 2020 / 11:08

      Simply beautiful, thanks so much for posting it. I’ve lost count of the number of times I’ve sat before this wonderful choir over the years and been transported to another place by its inspirational music.

      • msjadeli's avatar msjadeli February 6, 2020 / 16:36

        You are truly blessed to live near enough to see them singing multiple times.

  8. Mike's avatar Mike February 5, 2020 / 21:46

    I enjoyed reading this. Music is great for the soul,

  9. rochellewisoff's avatar rochellewisoff February 5, 2020 / 22:17

    Dear Keith,

    That’s two new words for me today. Verger and concinnity. Thank you. Your descriptions of the voices dipping and swirling were pitch perfect. Lovely piece. Love the choral frogs, too. 😉

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings February 6, 2020 / 11:11

      I usually learn from you! Thanks so much for you kind words Rochelle.

  10. tedstrutz's avatar tedstrutz February 5, 2020 / 22:42

    This was a beautiful piece, Keith. I enjoyed seeing the choir. What a place!

    A friend took this photo and I liked it knowing some good stories would come. You can see her work here… https://instaology.com/

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings February 6, 2020 / 11:17

      Thanks, Ted. It is a magnificent building and it boasts the longest cathedral nave in Europe – .and Jane Austin is buried beneath the floor!

      Just visited your friend’s site – what wonderful photos.

  11. plaridel's avatar plaridel February 5, 2020 / 23:17

    you have captured the moment very beautifully. well done.

  12. messymimi's meanderings's avatar messymimi's meanderings February 6, 2020 / 02:26

    There’s nothing quite like a beautiful choir. We have a couple of excellent ones in this area, i go listen when i can.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings February 6, 2020 / 11:19

      Absolutely, I can’t get enough choral music. Thanks, Mimi.

  13. Dale's avatar Dale February 6, 2020 / 05:37

    What a wonderful read, Keith. And, add me to the list who appreciates learning new words!!

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings February 6, 2020 / 11:21

      Thanks Dale. I didn’t realise I was introducing new words when I wrote it!

      • Dale's avatar Dale February 6, 2020 / 13:07

        It’s great when we do!

  14. Tannille's avatar Tannille February 6, 2020 / 06:22

    These choirs can be quite amazing. I could almost hear as I read.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings February 6, 2020 / 11:23

      They certainly can. Thanks so much for your generous words Tannille.

  15. Sandra's avatar Sandra February 6, 2020 / 12:22

    Beautiful piece, Keith. You did yourself proud this week!

  16. draliman's avatar draliman February 6, 2020 / 12:41

    It must be quite an experience to hear a talented choir in such a setting. And I Googled it – “concinnity” it a real word!

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings February 6, 2020 / 16:29

      It certanly is and … yes it is! Cheers Draliman

  17. Anita's avatar Anita February 6, 2020 / 15:07

    Well narrated.
    You make it look like a personal experience.
    Have looked for an echo after a grand performance.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings February 6, 2020 / 16:26

      I experience it as often as I possibly can! Thanks so much Anita.

  18. Liz Young's avatar Liz Young February 6, 2020 / 21:21

    A perfect description of a perfect few moments.

  19. Nobbinmaug's avatar Nobbinmaug February 6, 2020 / 21:48

    I, too, had to look up concinnity. Well done with that one.

    It’s amazing what people can do with their voices from music to acting to oration… The concinnity (this is probably the only time I’ll ever use that word.) of a choir can leave one in awe. I can understand why you go back.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings February 7, 2020 / 10:32

      It can and does leave me in awe, every single time. I think it’s the second time I’ve used that word. Whether or not I will again I really don’t know!

  20. James McEwan's avatar James McEwan February 7, 2020 / 20:17

    Song the inspiration for the soul.

  21. Woman walking Max's avatar Woman walking Max February 8, 2020 / 09:19

    I really your story Keith – you express the power of the choir’s music so lyrically.

  22. larry trasciatti's avatar larry trasciatti February 8, 2020 / 17:23

    That must have left quite a profound impression. Even with my vocabulary ,I’ve never heard of concinnity or verger before

  23. Brenda's Thoughts's avatar Brenda's Thoughts February 8, 2020 / 19:49

    What a beautiful story, Keith. I love when “music fills every corner of my being.” Lovely, really!!

  24. Dawn M. Miller's avatar Dawn M. Miller February 9, 2020 / 17:28

    Catching an echo…that’s beautiful.

  25. Fatima Fakier's avatar Fatima Fakier February 11, 2020 / 19:01

    Wonderfully captured, Keith! The way music fills our soul and leaves us wanting more at the end.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings February 13, 2020 / 10:42

      It does indeed. I can’t get enough. Thanks Fatima.

  26. Eliseo Lovetinsky's avatar Eliseo Lovetinsky May 27, 2020 / 15:50

    Hello there! I know this is somewhat off topic but I was wondering if you knew where I could locate a captcha plugin for my comment form? I’m using the same blog platform as yours and I’m having trouble finding one? Thanks a lot!

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