Keith's Ramblings

28 thoughts on “Fifty one words”

1. ceayr Jan 30, 2021 / 14:36

   You tell her, Keith!
   If the spirit is strong, the heart will mend.

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   • Keith's Ramblings Jan 30, 2021 / 14:48

     Indeed CE, especially if it’s a single malt!

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2. Woman walking Max Jan 30, 2021 / 14:46

   A well crafted poem Keith, hope his hearts mends.

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   • Keith's Ramblings Jan 30, 2021 / 14:49

     I think the chances are pretty good! Thanks for dropping by.

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3. Denise Hammond Jan 30, 2021 / 14:54

   Your romantic side is showing again, lol.

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   • Keith's Ramblings Jan 30, 2021 / 14:57

     I have my moments Denise!

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4. Christine Goodnough Jan 30, 2021 / 15:42

   Lovely verse and a great message.

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   • Keith's Ramblings Jan 30, 2021 / 15:57

     Thanks so much, Christine.

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5. Sadje Jan 30, 2021 / 16:19

   Fantastic poem!

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   • Keith's Ramblings Jan 30, 2021 / 16:50

     Nice of you to say so Sadje, thanks.

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     • Sadje Jan 30, 2021 / 17:32

       You’re welcome Keith

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6. Nima Mohan Jan 30, 2021 / 19:01

   Your romantic side too is beautiful 🙂

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   • Keith's Ramblings Jan 31, 2021 / 11:41

     That’s so kind of you Nima.

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     • Nima Mohan Feb 1, 2021 / 03:00

       My absolute pleasute Keith 😃

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7. pensitivity101 Jan 30, 2021 / 20:34

   Love that last line about the lock on your soul. Excellent Keith.

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   • Keith's Ramblings Jan 31, 2021 / 11:40

     I’m pleased! Thanks so much Di.

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8. Na'ama Yehuda Jan 30, 2021 / 20:41

   Ah, This is LOVELY!
   Fabulously done.
   Beguiling, even … 🙂

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   • Keith's Ramblings Jan 31, 2021 / 11:39

     …as I hoped! Thanks so much Na’ama.

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     • Na'ama Yehuda Jan 31, 2021 / 17:01

       😀

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9. relaxitsallwrite Jan 30, 2021 / 22:03

   Fanflippintastic, Keith!!

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   • Keith's Ramblings Jan 31, 2021 / 11:36

     Hehe! Thanks so much!

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     • relaxitsallwrite Jan 31, 2021 / 17:24

       Very welcome, Keith 🙂

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10. Marja Jan 31, 2021 / 04:24

    Great poem I especially love the last line @not the lock on my soul”

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    • Keith's Ramblings Jan 31, 2021 / 11:35

      Thanks so much Marja

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11. rochellewisoff Jan 31, 2021 / 12:51

    Dear Keith,

    Bravo! Applause! Simply stunning. I’m beguiled. 😉

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

    https://rochellewisoff.com/2021/01/31/weekend-writing-prompt-beguile/

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    • Keith's Ramblings Jan 31, 2021 / 13:58

      I couldn’t wish for a nicer comment! Thanks Rochelle.

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12. messymimi's meanderings Jan 31, 2021 / 23:51

    So well done! It’s a risk to give the key to your heart, but a risk worth taking when the right one comes.

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    • Keith's Ramblings Feb 1, 2021 / 14:16

      Absolutely so Mimi. Thank you.

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