Eighty-eight words for Sammi’s Weekend Writing Prompt where the given word is Downpour.
Saturday morning it was. He poured a coffee and settled down with the newspaper. Not much of interest.
In the sports section, he noticed the result of a football match. He didn’t realise it had been played yet. The weather forecast was odd too. Sunshine it promised, not the downpour battering his windowpane.
But it was a picture on the obituary page that startled him, a photograph of himself. A mistake, surely.
Then he noticed the date at the top of the page. It was next month’s paper.
~Magickal Graphics~
Poor guy! He’d better start saying his good-byes. You made quite the tale in 88 words.
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I think you’re right! Cheers Christine.
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OMG
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That about sums it up!
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Hi Keith – despairing take on the 88 words you were allowed – but an excellent twist of fate. Stay safe – Hilary
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Thanks Hilary, you too.
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Interesting take on the prompt. You can build a story from here onwards
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That’s a thought! Thanks Sadje
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You’re welcome 😉
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Whoa!😄
Sent from my iPad
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Too right!
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You definitely wove a scary one in 88 words! Wouldn’t want that happening to me
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Nor me! Thanks Na’ama.
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Dear Keith,
Now that was flat chilling…and well done I might add. 😉
Shalom,
Rochelle
https://rochellewisoff.com/2020/05/23/weekend-writing-prompt-downpour/
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Most kind of you Ma’am!
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Scary, but i hope he uses his time wisely.
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No harm in breaking the rules under the circumstances! Cheers Mimi.
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Okay. That was spooky.
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I guess it was! Cheers Denise.
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Well… 😯😯
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Indeed!
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What a horrid thing to see! Gah! Who really wants to know when their end is coming?
Well done, Sir!
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I couldn’t agree more! Cheers Dale.
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Ai! I hope he finds the time travel level that allows to change the future …
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That’s a thought! Thanks Na’ama.
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🙂
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A scary tale, yet a very interesting one, Sir 🙂
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Thanks Roshni.
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Well done, Keith. A one month notice. Wow. You need five more words, “and then he woke up.” I agree with Rochelle:chilling.
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If I’d had two more words I could have said ‘and then….’ and left it hanging. But I didn’t! Cheers Bill.
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Excellent! Now talk about chilling! This is extremely chilling.
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Not something I’d wish to experience! Cheers Annette.
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Oh my. What a chilling, twisty end!
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Just a bit!!
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Interesting twist at the end!
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That’s probably what he thought! Cheers.
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Ohhh that’s creepy!
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Well done, Keith
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Creeped me out writing it! Thanks Shweta.
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Interesting take on the prompt.
thanks for sharing us this post.
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