They agreed to meet at the signpost in the park. After months of slowly drifting apart, they’d reached a crossroads. Which way to go?
Walking slowly, heads bowed, the only sound was the swishing of grass beneath their feet.
He picked her a flower, she pushed it away. He tickling her nose with it and saw a hint of a smile.
He held her arm as they descended some steps then they strolled hand in hand towards the lake. Still, not a word passed between them.
They sat in silence watching two swans, then slowly turned to face each other.
The signpost became a distant memory.
Thanks to Rochelle for hosting and Dale Rogerson for the photo.
Prod the frogs to join in the fun.
Not sure she liked her nose being tickled?
I liked the quietness of this story.
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It wouldn’t have been as quiet if she’d sneezed! Cheers Tannille.
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Might have ruined the mood 😀
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Poignant, and written with control
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Thanks so much. Not my normal style but I thought it worth a try!
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Dear Keith,
Such a sweet meeting. I hope this is the beginning of a beautiful friendship. ❤
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Looks like it’s heading in the right direction! Thanks Rochelle.
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Such a sweet, sweet story.
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That’s so kind of you, thanks so much.
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Beautifully captured emotional journey!
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Thanks so much Reena
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You soppy git, as Del Boy might say!
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Mange tout CE, mange tout!
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Ah shucks, you old romantic Keith 🙂
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Aww, don’t, you’ll make me blush!
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Quite a departure for you, Keith, and beautifully done, in a restrained, understated way.
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I admit my finger hovered over the publish button for a while wondering if I was doing the right thing! Thanks so much for your encouraging words Sandra.
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I sometimes feel that way myself when I write out of character. Indulge yourself – it was certainly worth it.
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I like this a lot – I really recognise that crossroads moment and the fear that your heart is about to get broken. I’m glad this couple turn it around.
Hooray as well for this being a departure from your usual style, and you’ve done a really good job. I tried writing romance recently and it turned somehow into a dark political fantasy with love in sight. 🙈
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Haha! At least you tried! Thanks so much.
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Neil, you’ve been quite the romantic lately. Loved the quietness and the happy ending.
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Don’t know why I said “Neil.” He must have been the last one I read before yours. Keith. I knew it was you 🙂
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As they say, a change is as good as rest! Normal service will be resumed shortly!
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This is lovely Keith. Swans mate for life……………. and I love swans!
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I wondered if anyone would make that connection – and you did! Thanks Di.
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I did this post on soul mates when I first started my blog:
https://pensitivity101.wordpress.com/2013/12/16/soul-mates/
My Mum loved swans and after my Dad died, we adopted one for her birthday. Sadly he disappeared without trace, but we had several on the marina so I was able to update Mum with news from a very personal angle.
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What a lovely gesture. I just visited your post, and it’s informative as well as proof that opposites attract!
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Thanks Keith. Hubby and I have been together over 30 years now and our backgrounds are totally different, yet we are your traditional pair of old comfy slippers.
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Aww, that’s lovely!
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🙂 Thanks.
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Awwww…. and Mr. Froggie met Ms. Froggette! 🙂
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A match spawned in heaven!
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LOL!!
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This was absolutely lovely, Keith… You softie, you!
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Thanks Dale – I usually save my softie side for my poetry blog!
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I shall have to go snooping 🙂
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If you’re interested –
https://keiththepoet.wordpress.com/
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A sweet and well-written story, Keith. I also loved the romantic frogs. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Thanks Suzanne, I’m sure they’ll be very happy – the frogs and my couple!
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Aw, young love 🙂 You’ve been at the Photoshop again, fun!
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How did you guess? I usually spend longer on Froggie than I do writing my story!
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So romantic, Keith. I love the delicacy of the story, with the lovely swans at the end, one wonder replaced with another. And you know I love your froggies, this time a gentleman and a lady.
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That’s so kind of you, thanks so much. Even frogs have feelings!
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🙂
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Aaww! A romantic ending!
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It is, thanks Liz (that rhymes!)
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Awwww glorious! A lovely story of love
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Thanks so much Laurie
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it’s lovely. a new beginning beckons. 🙂
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Indeed it does. Thanks plaridel.
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A lyrically fluid sensitive write, Keith. I could feel the hesitations between them.
Perhaps, there could be a hopeful connection. Nicely written … loved it.
Isadora 😎
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One day soon I feel. Thanks so much Isadora.
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I liked the way you made use of the fidelity of swans to emphasize that this couple were truly in love. Nice romance, Keith.
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Swans really are the most romantic of birds. Thanks Penny.
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Lovely cute story… A nice break away from your usual breaking of hearts!
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I’m good at breaking hearts Angie!
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LOL, I have definitely noticed that!
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How sweet. I envisioned the couple as young in my first read, then aged in the second. Thank you for sharing!
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Thanks so much for dropping by and your delightful comment.
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Awwww. Sometimes you just need to take a walk and think together.
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Absolutely. Time away from everything else that’s going on. Thanks Mimi.
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Sigh. Lovely!
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Aww, thank you Sascha!
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Really enjoyed the calmness of this story and the sweet gestures within. Easily imagined.
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That’s so kind of you, thanks so much.
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From bittersweet resignation to sweet reconnection. Nicely understated Keith. Understatement is a tool rarely utilized in our garish, high-beam headlight media world.
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It is indeed. Thanks so much for your generous words.
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Keith, this was beautifully poignant and unlike my character, yours seem to be heading onward and upwards. Happy days ahead.
Best wishes,
Rowena
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I don’t often treat my subjects that nicely! Thanks Rowena.
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Ha! They might be getting payback.
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Ahhhh…love…. 🙂
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Thanks so much Dawn.
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