Seventy-four words…

Feb 9, 2019Feb 9, 2019Keith's Ramblings

for Weekend Writing Prompt

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Just above the horizon,

A golden moon glows in the deep blue yonder

midst a scattering of silver stars.

Staring into infinity,

I wonder what lies beyond.

The pressures of the day now gone,

I’m at one with myself, at one with my thoughts.

Heaven puts on a show.

Silver streaks shoot across the sky

Four, five, ten, more.

Then stillness returns

There is nowhere I’d rather be right now

Nowhere.

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Denise Hammond Feb 9, 2019 / 14:26

Nicely done.

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- Keith's Ramblings Feb 10, 2019 / 13:29
  
  Thank you Denise
  
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messymimi's meanderings Feb 10, 2019 / 00:00

Eloquent with not a word wasted.

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- Keith's Ramblings Feb 10, 2019 / 13:25
  
  Quite a few wasted from my original draft though! Cheers Mimi
  
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Still Loved...Still Missed Feb 10, 2019 / 10:14

Beautifully penned.

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- Keith's Ramblings Feb 10, 2019 / 13:24
  
  Very kind, thank you so much.
  
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rochellewisoff Feb 10, 2019 / 10:50

Dear Keith,

I enjoyed stargazing with you. Well done.

Shalom,

Rochelle

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- Keith's Ramblings Feb 10, 2019 / 13:24
  
  That pleases me! Thanks Rochelle.
  
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Woman walking Max Feb 10, 2019 / 12:54

You create a reflective mood with your well crafted story.

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deborahsdeliberations Feb 10, 2019 / 19:53

Beautifully written, Keith. I felt as if I were there stargazing too, forgetting for one blissful moment, all the cares and worries of life.

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- Keith's Ramblings Feb 12, 2019 / 10:43
  
  So kind of you, thanks Deborah.
  
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emilykarn64 Feb 14, 2019 / 16:43

A good first entry, come aback again.

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- Keith's Ramblings Feb 15, 2019 / 11:59
  
  Thanks so much.
  
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